Short Story Conclusion

Authors Note: This is my conclusion I wrote about a short story. We were given a piece of a fairytale (mine was cinderella) exept the scene was changed. Mine said that just as Cinderela arrived at the ball a chandelier fell and crushed the prince.

Cinderella cannot believe her eyes. Everyone is staring blankly at the crushed prince-but he's not dead. Cinderella leaps forward to the  Prince's side trying to comfort him. The prince opens his eyes to see Cinderella and he smiles. Eventually a group of strong men huddle  together and lift the chandelier off of him.  Suddenly, a crowd of royal people surround him blocking the view from everyone.  Cinderella is separated from the prince as he's taken away to a hospital. When midnight comes, Cinderella leaves (with both of her  slippers) disappointed. She will never see the prince again.