Monday, December 20, 2010

Final Draft-Tom Sawyer

Authors Note: This is my final draft for Tom Sawyer. It's about the sub theme 'crush'.
Your youth is something no one should take for granted. Just like Tom in Tom Sawyer, he excels in the art of being a kid. Like any boy, Tom has a crush-or two. He’s the master at flirting, but realizes that it’s only okay to flirt with one person at a time. Tom figures this out the hard way, and almost loses his true love, Becky, all in one big misunderstanding.

Tom’s first crush was brief. Her name was Amy. With golden locks all tied up in braids, and gorgeous blue eyes, Tom couldn’t resist. Therefore, he began his clever start to winning her heart. He tried to impress her during church, while collecting tickets to win his very own bible. Tom was in luck. It just so happened that the county judge is Amy’s dad. Both were quite impressed. This love affair doesn’t last very long though. Soon, a punishment will take its turn for the better when Tom’s at school.

While attending school, Tom seems to always get into trouble. His teacher scolded him for being naughty, and as his punishment Tom had to sit on the girl’s side of the classroom. To Tom, it seemed more like a reward than a punishment. This is where he met a girl named Becky. Once again he turned on his flirtatious personality, and showed her his artistic abilities. He began drawing a house with a boy outside of it. “It’s a beautiful man, now make me coming along.” Becky said. Tom did so. “It’s easy I’ll learn you at noon.” Tom said to Becky. From then on, the two fell in love. Eventually, Tom brings up marriage. At first, Becky didn’t understand. “Say, Becky, was you ever engaged?”
“What’s that?”
Why, engaged to be married.”
“No.”
“Would you like to?” asked Tom. It took a little convincing, but soon enough Tom got Becky to kiss him. In Tom’s eyes, when you kiss someone and tell them you love them, you’re engaged. The ‘big misunderstanding’ comes in to play now.
After Tom and Becky get over the excitement from being engaged, Tom mentions something he wished he hadn’t.

“No, I’ll never love anybody but you, Tom, and I’ll never marry anybody but you-and you ain’t to ever marry anybody but me, either.” Becky said.
“…It’s so nice. I never heard of this before.” Becky said with glee.
“Oh, it’s ever so gay! Why, me and Amy Lawrence-“
“Oh, Tom! Then I ain’t the first you’ve ever been engaged to!”
From then on, Tom tries to convince Becky that what went on with Amy was nothing-but Becky doesn’t believe him. Tom gets so discouraged, that he plans on running away, and becoming a pirate.

Time passes, and both children haven’t been in contact with each other for a while. Tom once hung around Becky’s house to see what happened to her, but found nothing. Aunt Polly starts to worry, and gives him pain killer for his depression. Later on, the two go back to school. Tom tries to apologize time and time again, but Becky isn’t ready to forgive him. Therefore, Tom packs up his things, and escapes with Joe Harper and Hucklebery Finn to Jackson’s island where they become pirates.

When the three boys escape, it becomes quite a riot. The town and Becky are sad, for they assumed that the three boys drowned. The boys grow homesick when they’re on the island, and they come back to town just in time for each of their funerals. They go back to school, and Tom, still angry with Becky, starts to flirt with all of the girls. (Mainly Amy) This makes her jealous. Becky catches on, and flirts with a boy to make Tom jealous too. This can go on no longer though. Tom apologizes to Becky, who STILL won’t forgive him.

After that, both return to school. Once it ends, Becky stays behind to snoop around the teacher’s desk. She finds the key to a safe which holds a book. This book is something the teacher always reads while the children are working. Becky decides to read a little bit, but finds Tom looking right at her. She quickly closed the book but ripped the paper. Tom promises he won’t tell on her though. The next day, when the teacher discovered the torn page, he went up and down the isle’s confiscating each of the kids. Finally he came across Becky, who was interrupted by Tom. “I did it!” He took the beating from his teacher, knowing it was worth it. “Oh, Tom! How could you be so noble?” That’s when Tom won back Becky’s heart, and finally forgave him. Becky decided to invite him to her picnic. Soon, it will take a turn for the worse.

As Tom and Becky roam through a romantic cave, they begin to branch away from their group. They got lost, and were stuck there for days. It seemed like it tested their relationship though. Tom took the ‘leader role’ and helped Becky out while she thought about dying. Unfortunately, all they had to eat was the left over wedding cake from the picnic. After a couple of days passed, some of the towns people went on a search mission and found them lying in a cave starving. They’ve survived-just barely.

Tom recovers more quickly than Becky. He stopped by her house to see how she was doing, but Becky was still on bed rest, and couldn’t come out. Both recovered fully after a week. From then on, nothing else spectacular happened between the two. They’re still very much so in L-O-V-E!

As you can tell, you only get a few chances in life at love. Therefore, your youth shouldn’t be taken for granted. Live your childhood to the fullest when you can.

Monday, December 13, 2010

Chapter 33 Prompt


Authors Note: This is the reading prompt we were assigned. It's about chapter 33 and why it's important.
Throughout the story Tom Sawyer, there were many important chapters that made it valuable. Although to me, the most important was chapter 33. This is because it ended the life of Injun Joe, a wise criminal who had done no good, and treasure is found. Soon Tom and Huck, founders of the treasure, will become rich.
My theory is that in chapter 33, there were two different modes, and they changed as you read on. In the beginning, the mode is Irony. This is because Injun Joe starved to death. He was trapped in McDougal’s Cave, since the town decided to lock the main entrance because Tom and Becky got lost in it.  That seems like a nightmare vision-I would never want to die of starvation. Even though Injun Joe was a fugitive, the hole town was sorrowful while attending his funeral. Later on, the mode changes to romance. Huck and Tom decide to enter the cave again, because they realize that’s where Injun Joe hid his treasure. To do so, they dig a hole, and go through it. When they’re inside, they see a cross on the wall. Tom and Huck dig underneath it and find the treasure. After that, it ends with life symbols. Huck gets ‘adopted’ by the widowed wife, and lets him live with her. She takes him to school, church, and even makes him wear nice clothes during the week. Although, he may not like it at first, it’s the only thing he can do in order to be in Tom’s gang.
Another factor that proves my theory is symbolism. As I mentioned, there were two different modes in chapter 33. The symbols for the mode Irony are sorrowful sight, dim twilight, and bloody minded outcast. For romance, the symbols are sumac bushes, spring (water), cross, treasure box, and gold coins. Once again, these symbols prove my reasoning correct.
In conclusion, chapter 33 is the most important out of the story Tom Sawyer.  It finishes the book in a happy way, ending lives of all evil and making life symbols out of it. This is why chapter 33 is the most meaningful in this story.

Friday, December 3, 2010

Authors Note: This is a poem I wrote during workshop day. It's about being on vacation-someplace warm were I would rather be!

Waves crashing on the shore,
makes me want to swim some more.

I can see children play,
who have been here all day.

They scream and shout,
some even pout.

For the sunscreen hurts their eyes,
and soon I hear cries.

Their mom calms them down,
by acting like a clown.

Which makes them laugh,
their pain is cut in half.

Now they're ready to swim,
so they splash with their limbs.

This is so much fun
until vacation's done

Thursday, December 2, 2010

Authors Note:This is a poem I made about  New York. I have to give some credit to Abby for helping me out. Hope you like it!

As I stand outside Time Square,
I can feel the cold winter air
whisping around and flipping my hair

The gentle white snow,
falls on me as I go
I think to myself, ho ho ho!

Christmas is near,
with snow and reindeer!