Authors Note: This is a poem I wrote during workshop day. It's about being on vacation-someplace warm were I would rather be!
Waves crashing on the shore,
makes me want to swim some more.
I can see children play,
who have been here all day.
They scream and shout,
some even pout.
For the sunscreen hurts their eyes,
and soon I hear cries.
Their mom calms them down,
by acting like a clown.
Which makes them laugh,
their pain is cut in half.
Now they're ready to swim,
so they splash with their limbs.
This is so much fun
until vacation's done
The last sentence sounds kind of weird, syllable wise. I would consider turn vacation is done to vacation's done.
ReplyDeleteYeah, you're right it sounds better that way.
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